Nu e tot cum ne dorim…


Nu e tot cum ne dorim… 

Un firicel de floare cândva el s-a născut;
Şi inflorindu-şi soarta, firav el a crescut.
Doar cu dureri şi lacrimi, el viaţa şi-a croit,
Chiar şi prin foc şi ape, el viaţa şi-a clădit.
Furtuni erau în cale, dar n-a rămas pe loc;
Şi multe a-ndurat în arşiţa de foc.
Un firicel mai mic din “ea” , s-a-nfiripat,
Şi lângă floarea-albastră să spere l-a-nvatat.
Firul de floare blândă cu dragoste-l creştea,
Credea că are tot, dar nu era aşa.
Căci într-o bună zi, lumina o părăsi,
Ce tare plângea floarea, că nu-l putea zări !

Published in: on April 29, 2012 at 7:01 pm  Comments (26)  

26 CommentsLeave a comment

  1. Not sure if the translation did it properly, was this poem about a child?

    • The poem it’s about a flower… It’s a sad story…

  2. si-nca spinu-i tare
    inteapa chiar de vrei
    sa vezi si tu cum e
    prea aproape de stai!

    smile🙂 sa treaca sadness.

    • … a fost si este inca prea tare “spinul”…. Multumesc !!!

  3. Nice. A bit of nostalgia in every one of them.

    • Thank you !

  4. The poem is nice and i find a bit similar to my poem “Lost someone in the wind of words”. Check it out on my blog http://mixveg.wordpress.com
    and let me know if you feel the same..🙂

    • Thank you !!! Your poem is great… You’re right !!!
      Thanks for visiting my Blog !🙂

  5. Wow..this is really a beautiful poem… love reading it!!!🙂

    • Thank you !!!!🙂 …. I’m glad to hear that …🙂

  6. The sadness and wistfulness comes through in the translation, and in the rhythm too.
    Have you tried writing in English or doing your own translations?
    Thanks for dropping my blog.

    • No… I write in my language ..romanian language…🙂 Thank you !!!!

  7. In any Language beautiful words can be inspiring,lovely work

    • Thank you very much !!!🙂

  8. Your poem is great…

    • Thank you !!!😀🙂

  9. Thank you for visiting my blog and liking my post. I’m glad your ‘like’ led me back here – I like your poems!
    Dorinda

    • Thank you !😀

  10. Frumoasa poezie!
    Eu o interpretez asa: despre “greutatile vietii”, ca sa zic asa..si despre puterea de a trece peste ele.

    • ….:D
      Iti multumesc tare mult pentru tot !:D:*:*

  11. .. felicitari ..

    • Va multumesc enorm !🙂

  12. How superbly you wrote about the sadness of flower.🙂
    I really enjoyed reading the same.
    The Translation has always been a problem on your blog as I am not able to comprehend your Romania language but it worked for me as it always does but I admire and ruminate that I am not lucky enough to read your blog in the akin language in which you write your blog.😦
    any ways, take care and I’ll be again here🙂
    Harshit Chauhan

    • ….🙂

      Thank you !

  13. Nice……

    • Thanks !😀


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