Fără de noroc


Fără de noroc

În mai când s-a născut biata albină
Când s-a văzut în noua ei grădina,
Credea că este raiul pe pământ…
Dar nu ştia că-n viaţa ei vor fi atât:

…doar ploi şi vânt.

În noul stup, n-a zăbovit prea mult,
Căci izgonită a fost far’ un cuvânt.
Şi în alt stup a fost primită
Şi doar acolo, ea a fost iubită.

Când într-o zi perechea şi-a-ntalnit,
Zburau doar împreună… spre cer, spre infinit.
Şi viaţa le păreau atâta de uşoară,
Şi seamă nu-şi dădeau că timpul trece… zboară.

Şi într-o zi când ea, de el n-a ascultat
Când aripa şi-a frânt. Ah, Doamne…ce-a oftat !
Dar nu voia nimic, doar ajutor cerea,
Dar toţi o părăsise şi nici că le păsa.

S-a-ntors din nou la stup zdrobită de durere,
Plină de deznădejde şi fără să mai spere,
Şi aripa cealaltă s-a frânt şi a căzut.
« – De ce nu e iubirea aşa cum am crezut ? »

Published in: on June 28, 2012 at 11:51 pm  Comments (48)  

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  1. Norocoaso, nu te mai văita🙂 Of

    • Dar nu ma vait…
      …de vina-i norocul , care nu a fost prezent inca de la inceput in viata mea…🙂

      • 🙂 s-a întors roata acum

        • …poate ca da🙂

  2. Nice!

    • Thank you, Stefan !😀

  3. Minunata poezia, Eda!
    Din pacate, uneori, se mai intampla ca cel bun, sa nu aibe noroc.
    Iti doresc o seara minunata!🙂

    • Iti multumesc frumos, Stefania !
      Asa este…🙂
      O seara dulce !
      Te pup…🙂

  4. I’ve nominated you for the Sunshine Award
    http://mycruisestories.com/2012/06/29/thesunshine-award/

    • Thank you very much !🙂

  5. O astfel de trist poem. A început de sondare mai mult ca un poem de dragoste, dar, până la sfârşitul anului, a fost aproape de disperare.
    Mi-a placut povestea, care a fost spus şi modul în care ţesute cuvintele.

    • Thank you very much !!!!
      :D:D

  6. frumos! 😉

    • Thank you !!! (Multumesc! )😀

  7. Good evening to you neighbors ? Whether it’s hot

    • Good evening !
      The whether is as supposed to be: normal…🙂

  8. succes si maine la ultima proba! sa ne bucuram de rezultate, tu in primul rand de munca depusa si de roadele ei, iar eu de faptul ca stradaniile rasplatesc temerarii, contrazicand titlul oarecum, desi rasplata muncii nu are musai legatura cu norocul, caci devotiunea- meritorie!🙂 toate bune, Eda!

    • Ah !
      Multumesc frumos !
      Sa dea Dumnezeu sa te auda …🙂
      O zi dulce iti doresc …🙂
      Te pup !

  9. Dear Denisa, unfortunately I do not know Spanish, but I try to translate your beautiful poems into English and enjoy them. Well, thanks much for sharing your inspiring poems to your readers. I have great pleasure visiting your blog. It is interesting. Your are very tender and beautiful, that is why your poems are so beautiful. Thank you again. And thanks for following my blog, thanks for all your like-s. I have the honor to receive your kind attention to my blog.

    I have on offer. You had better to put into your blog the E-mail subscription tool. Find it in widgets. As for me, I would like to subscribe to your blog. I am sure that many of your readers would like the same.

    Wish you all the best in your future endeavours.

    Best regards, Arlen

    • Dear Arlen,

      Firstly, I want to say that my language is Romanian not Spanish and I am very happy because you are trying to translate the poems into English to read.
      Secondly, I want to thank you very much , your words makes me happy.
      Thank you very very much !!!
      I wish you a sweet and lovely day !!!😀🙂

      • Dear Denisa, here is my “Raspunde” to You🙂 Thanks You for Your kind feedback. I thought the language you are writing is Spanish as Romanian seemed to me much similar to Spanish🙂 Well sorry for that, it is my mistake. I use a various tools to translate Your poems. Denisa, and what about the E-mail subscription? Would You use it?
        Thaks for your answer.

        Arlen

        • Right now , I’m not using this tool, but I will take into consideration your suggestion.

          Thank you for advice.

          Best regards,
          Denisa

      • OK🙂 I’ll subscribe with pleasure. Thanks much. Continue to follow my blog. I do the same about your blog.

        Arlen

  10. Thank you for the like on my blog!

    • You’re welcome !
      🙂

  11. ti-am citit ultimele doua poezii si am constatat ca ai talent la versuri dar iti lipsesc anumite cunostinte biblice la ultima si ceva informatii din apicultura la penultima. totusi nu descuraja, continua sa scrii si totodata nu te opri de la “cetire”

    • Ok ..multumesc din suflet !!!

      Nu o sa ma opresc aici !
      😀

      O zi frumoasa !

  12. Nicely said !

    • OK…😀

      Thank you !:D

      • Welcome !!

        • :D:D

  13. Once upon a time, there was a girl who talked to the moon. And she was mysterious and she was perfect, in that way that girls who talk to moons are. In the house next door, there lived a boy. And the boy watched the girl grow more and more perfect, more and more beautiful with each passing year. He watched her watch the moon. And he began to wonder if the moon would help him unravel the mystery of the beautiful girl. So the boy looked into the sky. But he couldn’t concentrate on the moon. He was too distracted by the stars. And it didn’t matter how many songs or poems had already been written about them, because whenever he thought about the girl, the stars shone brighter. As if she were the one keeping them illuminated.

    One day, the boy had to move away. He couldn’t bring the girl with him, so he brought the stars. When he’d look out his window at night, he would start with one. One star. And the boy would make a wish on it, and the wish would be her name.

    At the sound of her name, a second star would appear. And then he’d wish her name again, and the stars would double into four. And four became eight, and eight became sixteen, and so on, in the greatest mathematical equation the universe had ever seen. And by the time an hour had passed, the sky would be filled with so many stars that it would wake the neighbors. People wondered who’d turned on the floodlights.

    The boy did. By Thinking About DENISA ARICESCU!!!!1

    • Waw… It’s so beautiful and lovely…🙂

      Thank you… Thank you very much !!!

      Have a nice day !!!😀

      Kiss

  14. Hi, Thanks for stopping by🙂

    • Ok….😀

      You’re welcome !

  15. Eda, vă rugăm să scrie gândurile voastre de dragoste cum ar trebui să fie?

    • Sincere…😉

  16. De ce nu e iubirea asa cum am crezut ?
    Eda, vă rugăm să scrie gândurile voastre de dragoste cum ar trebui să fie?

  17. Sincere: psihologic, eticii sociale, sau nu vă place înşelăciune de sine?

  18. Foarte buna intrebarea finala, sperantele si crezul nostru se sfarima la o adiere de vint, in fata omului netrebnic in care am investit multa iubire sentimente si pasiune. O zi faina.

    • Va multumesc enorm mult !!!

      Aveti mare dreptate…😉

      O zi frumoasa va doresc !🙂

  19. Oh, norocu’ asta…emotionante versuri…8->

    • Iti multumesc enorm de mult… :D:*:*

  20. exsista o varianta o istorie ca .. in timp uitat oamenii se rugau si faceau ofrande zeuui Noroc .. pentru prosperitate materiala .. in schimb zeul Noroc cerea un copil .. primul .. pentru a indepli dorintele pe care iil manca ,.. uau ! .. fiecare cuvant are o vibratie antonimul cuvantuului noroc deja fiecare il stie . deci cel mai bine ar fi cred eu .. adoptarea starii de ASA SA FIE .. ! felicitari EDA🙂

    • Ohh… Va multumesc enorm de mult !😀
      O zi frumoasa !

  21. So Nice/

    • Thanks !😀


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