O patinatoare-floare


O patinatoare-floare 

Timidă şi gingaşă,
O floare patina…
Dar nu ştia,
Că rochia albă ce-o purta
Cu tivul descusut,
S-a ofilit de la sărut
Şi o petală i-a căzut…

O floare albă patina…
În palma ta,
Pe pielea ta
De catifea…

Published in: on February 18, 2014 at 9:00 pm  Comments (34)  

34 CommentsLeave a comment

  1. On February 18, 2014 at 9:03 pm dmd said:

    ..frumoasă!

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    • On February 18, 2014 at 9:26 pm Eda said:

      Multumesc mult !
      O seara dulce ! 🙂

      Reply
  2. On February 18, 2014 at 9:10 pm OrhiKamyDeea said:

    O petală albă, patina
    Pe-un fulg de nea
    Ce se topea…
    Căzând din zbor
    Plutind uşor
    Spre faţa ta.
    O săruta
    Cu o atingere
    De catifea.

    Frumoase versuri!

    Reply
    • On February 18, 2014 at 9:27 pm Eda said:

      Cat de dragut ! 🙂
      Multumesc tare mult !

      O seara dulce !

      Reply
      • On February 18, 2014 at 9:31 pm OrhiKamyDeea said:

        🙂
        Cu placere!
        O seara frumoasa sa ai!

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        • On February 18, 2014 at 9:31 pm Eda said:

          Multumesc !
          Pupici. 🙂

        • On February 19, 2014 at 12:06 am OrhiKamyDeea said:

          Multumesc pentru pupici.
          Tare dragalasi sunt 😀

  3. On February 18, 2014 at 9:19 pm ane said:

    🙂 bisous.

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    • On February 18, 2014 at 9:30 pm Eda said:

      Bisous, ma chérie… 😀

      Une bonne soirée a toi !

      Reply
      • On February 18, 2014 at 9:34 pm ane said:

        ..merci bcp.. 🙂

        Reply
  4. On February 19, 2014 at 3:03 am Dan Popescu said:

    versul tau frumos, duios/ce-i venit din inimi pure/ne indeamna la iubire/patinand spre nemurire

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    • On February 19, 2014 at 10:09 am Eda said:

      Cat de frumos ! 🙂

      Va multumesc mult !
      O zi frumoasa !

      Reply
  5. On February 19, 2014 at 5:21 pm Simona said:

    Frumoasă poezie!

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    • On February 19, 2014 at 5:48 pm Eda said:

      Multumesc mult si frumos ! 🙂

      Pupici.

      Reply
      • On February 19, 2014 at 5:50 pm Simona said:

        🙂

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  6. On February 20, 2014 at 6:56 am Russel Ray Photos said:

    I’m picturing a field of beautiful flowers to go with your poem.

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    • On February 20, 2014 at 7:14 pm Eda said:

      Thank you very much ! 🙂

      Reply
  7. On February 20, 2014 at 9:14 am Louis said:

    Merci Eda, pour ta visite.
    Je te souhaite une bonne journée.
    Bisous.

    Reply
    • On February 20, 2014 at 7:12 pm Eda said:

      Merci beaucoup ! 🙂

      Une bonne journée !

      Reply
  8. On February 20, 2014 at 12:43 pm petrel41 said:

    Congratulations, Denisa!

    I have nominated your blog for the Versatile Blogger Award.

    More on this nomination is at

    http://dearkitty1.wordpress.com/2014/02/20/versatile-blogger-award-thanks-barbara/

    Reply
    • On February 20, 2014 at 7:11 pm Eda said:

      Thank you ! 🙂

      Reply
  9. On February 21, 2014 at 2:48 am emeraldwake said:

    amazing blog , regards

    Reply
    • On February 21, 2014 at 12:40 pm Eda said:

      Thank you ! 🙂

      Reply
  10. On February 21, 2014 at 8:50 pm Mélanie said:

    sooo cute and sweet, Denise… LL=large like! 🙂 sanatate si munti de inspiratie, pretty young lady! 🙂 cu drag, Mélanie

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    • On February 21, 2014 at 9:08 pm Eda said:

      Va multumesc, scumpa doamna ! 🙂
      Va pup si va doresc toate cele bune !

      Reply
  11. On February 22, 2014 at 9:50 am Aliosa said:

    Buna dimineata Eda !
    ” O patinatoare – floare ”
    Si-o poeta zambitoare !!! 🙂 🙂 🙂

    Weekend placut !
    Aliosa.

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    • On February 22, 2014 at 8:05 pm Eda said:

      Da da ! 🙂

      Va multumesc mult !

      Reply
  12. On February 23, 2014 at 7:29 pm oldpoet56 said:

    You do write some nice poems. I like what I see in your work, you do seem to be a nice person and most definitely the world needs more nice, decent people.

    Reply
    • On February 23, 2014 at 8:28 pm Eda said:

      Thank you for all ! 🙂

      Reply
  13. On February 23, 2014 at 9:24 pm Loredana Milu said:

    Poezia cu cel mai inspirat titlu şi cu un cuprins delicat.
    Felicitări! ♥

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    • On February 23, 2014 at 9:37 pm Eda said:

      M-ai emotionat! E o floare tare dragalasa si patineaza atat de bine…e olimpica, dar isi stapaneste emotiile cu greu, trebuie ajutata cumva ! 🙂

      Iti multumesc din suflet !♥

      Reply
      • On February 23, 2014 at 9:58 pm Loredana Milu said:

        Le stăpâneşte cu greu, se vede, că îşi mai pierde câte o petală…:)

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        • On February 23, 2014 at 10:10 pm Eda said:

          Dar o va recupera la momentul potrivit ! 🙂


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